This doesn't mean that this isn't a good book, no way. I still hold by the compliments I gave to the book. Blank verse, especially, was something I think the book hit dead on. The idea of blank verse is to give the writing a more uneducated feel to it, that the writing almost comes purely from the heart and soul of the writer. However, a lot of books take too many liberties in writing in blank verse, assuming that the originality points for the style would make up for poor writing. You need to get the timing of the writing just right, and then drop down to the next line.
For example:
I talked to my sister
and she said
that I was taking too long
on the computer.
While this was a simplistic example, and probably not a very good one, the idea is that the poetry tell the story, and the story supplements the poetry. They build on one another. And this is the best thing in the novel, in my opinion. But, to quote a cheesy 80's reading program, you don't have to take my word for it.
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